I hear the rough water smashing against the rocky banks with a thum.
I think I might fall from the strong wind and as I fall I could feel the drops of water skim against my cheek.
I feel the scaly barnacles onto the rocks as I step onto the soaked soggy sand.
I wonder if the stormy weather will change the small sandy beach.
What an enchanting poem Caleb, I can imagine myself being there on a stormy day. Did you mean to say the water was smashing on the rocky banks with a thump? What kind of image or picture do you think would go with your poem?
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